It was a normal day at Rogue school with three friends in high school talking in the back while they had free time when suddenly all the lights went out. Everybody started screaming in fear looking at the door and past the door was something that no one has ever seen before was a creature that was crawling on the ceiling with green goop spilling out of its mouth and his eyes were like sharp red daggers staring at you. The three boys sitting in the back were Michael, Billy, and Joe. They were the oldest in the classroom so Billy told everybody to calm down and so they did and Billy got up and walked toward the door and the creature was nowhere to be seen so he looks out the door and turns around saying look there isn’t anything out there and as soon as he said that a large hand came out of nowhere and grabbed him by the neck and pulled him out of the classroom slamming and screaming into the lockers and everyone went to the back of the room still hearing his cries echo in the halls until it was cut. Joe ran toward the door and looked and saw the creature crawling on the ceiling toward him so he slammed the door right in the face and locked it. They ended up waiting hours and hours in the class room, it was 3:00 and that’s when it happened, the closet door opened a crack so one of the student went up to the closet to shut the door and as soon as he did he got pulled in the closet screaming until it got cut off and the lights finally turned back on and everyone ran home. Joe had never gone back to that school after losing his friend. The creature came every 2 years. The body’s of those two boys were never found and they never found out what those creatures and where they live until it kept happening
1. list one thing you've learned from writing this paper that you have applied ti other writing assignment. i liked how i was able to put one of my story's in this portfolio's. 2. i faced that i had to face a lot of typing and that i took my time on this portfoilio.
3. horror because i wrote it as a scary paper and it kind of is because of the details.
4. i would need to improve my spelling from time to time.
5. the reason why i put the paper in is because the story was really good and that if it had some fixes it would be a good story.